So lovely and sweet, as it always is when you write them. It seems perfectly natural to me that you're writing Break in first person. The whole flow of his manic-exhausted thoughts seems very much him, including the way he starts to focus back on being his usual self near the end.

It's also a lovely way to see Liam through his perceptions of him, which is especially nice to me because, as dearly as I love Break, it's Liam I'm really in love with.